EN120 Composition
Correct the following sentences.  You will then discuss them in group and agree on an answer and a reason for your corrections.

1. During lunch every one has the same thing on there minds, whats going on tonight, there has to be a party.
2. “its to cold in here” I think to myself, “our’s is defiantly the coldest cabin”.
3. I felt alright, I laid there and looked at the stars.
4. After getting off the phone with my firend, my mother came upstairs.  She could not of come at a worst tiem.
5. Since I beat my brother up the stairs meant I had the choice of which bedroom to choose.
6. We use to go there often, eventhough the hill seemed like it was getting steeper every time.
7. Ignoring the clouds I concentrated on my thought.  “Mind if I hang around?”, my friend asked. “Your bothering me I replied.”
8. The memory of holidays and family gatherings are recalled.  Each one in the family played their parts well.
9. He new he had to go.  Because if he didn’t, he’d be in a lot of trouble.
10. We were scared but, didn’t move.  the bears were busy eating the vegetation and the didn’t seem interested in us at all. They didn’t even notice eachother.