Editing
 

1. He won't do nothing about it.
2. I need alot of attention.
3. I forgot I was suppose to prepare.
4. He shouldn't of told her about the party.
5. I gained organizing and thinking skills, along with thinking quick.
6. If a student is made to write on a topic of little interest to her, the chances of her learning anything is slim.
7. Everybody has to bring their own juice.
8. As a future teacher, censorship seems to me to be an overblown issue.
9. I never showed up because, my parents wouldn't let me have the car.
10. The teacher cannot teach students to write, this can only be learned by doing it.
11. There is only one reason why the new sex education program will never succeed; parental objections.
12. To make your spelling more perfect, study structure.
13. "I don't want you to go.", said mom.
14.  We stopped at my parent's house to change clothes.
15. "I felt lonely." Was the answer.
16. Pulling the gate that lead to the yard, he noticed light coming from a first floor window.
17. We loved eachother all through highschool.
18. As I approached the house, Jim wasn't home.
 


Editing for Clarity
 

1. Personally, I think that it just doesn't make any sense.

2. Because we are all from the same town, we have basically all the same friends, who many of go here also.

3. When you go there, there's usually alot of brothers present, if not all of them.

4. Being a father in the sixties and seventies is very different than the eighties and nineties.

5. A friend, I feel presents love unconditionally, one trait I feel must be present in order to have a good friendship.

6. Any thing that a reader has to read several times to understand usually is a good indicator that there is a problem.

7. Examples of what specific lyrics were at the heart of the controversy were printed.

8. In my opinion, I think the men are more friendlier than the women here.

9. I have countless amounts of memories.

10. The reason why it was at 2:30 was because there had to be time for everyone to get there.

11. it was a very cold September morning that happened to be a Sunday that I had to get up to go to a game.

12. It took us about an hour and twenty minutes before we pulled into the ski area.

13. I was unaware of the fact that he had arrived.

14. We should consider the question as to whether drugs should be legalized.

15. My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me for as long as I live.

16. I first met him when he worked at the same restaurant where we both worked.

17. Someone had recognized the military life style effected the servicemen stationed at sea and had to fight in wars.

18. People are yelling and raising their hands giving their support or just because it was race day.

19. The need for learning what to do with all the information learned is also necessary when presenting oneself to a perspective employer.


 Conventions

1. Censorship is an infringement on a free countries rights.

2. I felt like I was the one who's grade will suffer.                         .

3. Parent's must keep a closer eye on there kids.

4. Don't get me wrong, college is great.

5. Just let the public know what their up against.

6. It's a wise dog that scratches it's own fleas.

7. Me being the person I was back then decided I was going to flirt with him just to see his reaction.

8.  I had gotten very attached to the children, and them to me.

9.  Stacey was scared and confused of what to do.

10. For if I took the medium level, I might have not went through all this pain.

11. She was a sophomore in my school and was interested in me since the beginning of freshman year.

12. We were now together for a year and a half.

13. "I can't attend". she said.

14. No sacrafice is to big for John and I.