Exercises to improve your use of description
Choose a spot with a view you like. It does not have to be scenic.
Any place will do. It can be new, or familiar, cluttered or bucolic.
Spend 15 minutes observing and taking notes. Try to use all of your
senses. Use this setting. You may write a description of it,
or use it as a setting for action in your story.
Describe a place that you know well. It could be your room from home or the place that you live now. Limit your description to about three paragraphs. Now describe the same place again, this time choosing a tone from the list below. Communicate this mood through your description. Repeat this exercise for several qualities from the list. If you wish, try describing a person instead of a place.
Moods: Anger, Love, Boredom, Anxiety, Fear, Impatience, Shyness, Condescension, Nostalgia, Happiness, Desire, Weariness, Defeat, Awe
Observing a Stranger;
Go to a public place such as the library, a fast-food restaurant, the
cafeteria, the HUB, a class etc. where you can inconspicuously observe
the people around you and choose one person to focus on. Find someone
who interests you and try to observe for 20 minutes. Try to answer
the following questions; What is the person’s physical appearance?
Describe his or her attire. What is the person’s approximate age?
What do you think this person’s occupation (or major) might be? Where
do you think this person might live? Why? what kind of person
do you think this person might be? What are the clues to his or her
personality? What other kinds of information can you come up with?
How would you describe this person’s social class background? How
much education do you think this person has? You may follow your
subject and try to eavesdrop on conversations.
Later, try to write a story with this person as a character.